User talk:Etmetalakret
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Proof 1: Inequalities
The well-known Trivial Inequality states that if is a real number, then . Prove that if and are nonnegative real numbers, then (Sidenote: this is a very different kind of inequality problem than you're used to. In school, we find when inequalities are true; here, we're showing it's always true.)
Explanation
I found the proof by working backwards; I started with the desired result, and connected it to something true. Here is the wall of equations on my page (sadly I can't get them aligned): Because the left-hand side of this equation is a perfect square, this is actually the Trivial Inequality in disguise. The desired inequality is therefore implied by a true result. Really understand and grasp how I derived this before you read the following proofs:
Bad Proof
I start out with Multiply the inequality by and square it, . Letting our algebra go on autopilot, and , so . This is true by Trivial Inequality, which completes the proof.
Why is this proof bad?
- Written Backwards: We must always write proofs like: true result desired result. However, the proof is written backwards so that the desired result true result. The Trivial Inequality should be at the start, not the end.
- Informal Word Choice: Please don't use the phrase "algebra autopilot" in a proof, and don't write sentences with no verbs (see the "Multiply the inequality by and square it"). Also, don't use "I," although "we" is totally acceptable.
- Not Enough Space: A little more space would make this proof easier to read. Important equations should be given their own line.
Good Proof
By the Trivial Inequality, we have that Factoring this inequality returns . We add to both sides and factor to get . Note that because and are nonnegative, both sides are nonnegative; we may therefore take the square root of the inequality, which yields Finally, dividing both sides by gives the desired inequality of .