blackout poetry

by flec, Feb 22, 2024, 4:30 AM

it's where you either write something or take it out from a book, and then cross out letters to make a poem
original:

Dear Via,

I might be high up a little bit. I might always be lingering above you, and when I lift you up to my eye level, I know it seems like you might fall to your death. I know the cars in the street look like ants scurrying around, I know the houses look like the erasers you lost all the time. When you climbed the diving board today and looked down, I know you felt like your breath would be stolen when you fell, that you would somehow land the wrong way, somehow would disappear when you hit the water. But I promise it will be okay. I promise that I’ll lower you gently to your feet. I promise I’ll make sure you never fall, and if you do, the landing is soft. I’ll make sure you’ll never be hurt.

Love, Acrophobia

August 8th, 2020
blackout:

Via,

I might be lingering
when I lift you
to my eye level
seems like you might fall
cars look like ants
houses look like erasers
When you looked down
you felt like your breath would be stolen when you fell
somehow land wrong
somehow disappear
But I promise
I’ll lower you
to your feet
never fall
land soft
never hurt.

Acrophobia

August 8th, 2020
reflection:
it was kind of hard to post this on aops because there's no highlighting feature as i know it lol
same goes for all of my pieces--this one means a lot to me and stealing the idea in any way would lead to me being really pissed off and would not hesitate to call you out on this very blog.
i mean, if you want a whole entry dedicated to you, that would be a pretty good way.

what i mean by this is not writing anything in my style like this (like involving the phobia, a person, etc) well for personal use it would be a good way to overcome fears, but like to post it anywhere absolutely not, no.

i was originally going to submit this piece to scholastic but you know what happened there... hopefully i can enter it to something else! i really like this
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I didn’t know blackout poetry was a thing
It seems hard

by SapphireDolphin9, Feb 22, 2024, 4:40 AM

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can i have a whole entry dedicated to me :sparkle:
in a good way tehe
but rly beautiful writing <33

by CC_chloe, Feb 22, 2024, 4:41 AM

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wow
blackout poetry is so deep
taking away to create meaning
thanks for sharing, this is really cool
i think the way you wrote it as the phobia talking to the person is really unique and its an intriguing idea

by craZoreo145, Feb 22, 2024, 4:42 AM

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i just made a poem with a writing thing i did for my blog a bit ago
i wont post it but thanks for being so inspirational <3

by craZoreo145, Feb 22, 2024, 5:04 AM

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that's like, the best compliment i could ever get.. hearing that always makes me so happy :$~$) thanks

by flec, Feb 22, 2024, 5:05 AM

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i like blackout poetry bc u can do it even w writers block
i love this tho
bro ur so good at poetry and writing i want to be like u and jen and roselyn and katherine and catvoid
yall r my role models

by madeleinelee, Feb 22, 2024, 4:49 PM

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WAIT THAT SOUNDS SO COOL
i want to try but i know ill get stuck on like the first word-
yikes ur really pro at this

by Beast_Academic_Emma, Feb 22, 2024, 7:38 PM

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I love "you felt like your breath would be stolen when you fell"
it's like - soffocating yet free at the same time

by Helena_Liang, Feb 23, 2024, 1:03 AM

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my favourite stanza in the whole thing!
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by flec, Feb 23, 2024, 4:41 PM

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orz i did one too but i suck at it

by ujulee, Feb 23, 2024, 10:46 PM

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that's really good blackout poetry
i did it for an assignment in the beginning of the year and honestly i was just randomly blacking out chunks of text sob

by foreverlulu1, Feb 24, 2024, 9:22 PM

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you can do that for blackout and still get a super nice poem :D

by flec, Feb 27, 2024, 1:28 AM

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